Julia looks as if her clothes were silk.
Her movements flow as liquid milk.
I look away and back again,
As if noticing her clothes were a sin.
The way they cling and sway
Gives all her pretty curves away.
How's that for modernizing? :) Still confused on the deeper meaning. I kept looking for one but failed to see it. Anyone else figure it out?
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ReplyDeleteI liked how you modernized the poem... its beautiful!
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