then, like, I think, how fluttery flows
That waterfall of her clothes.
Next, when I look over with my eyes and see
That splendid wave each step makes;
Oh how that shining takes me!
You know at first I had no idea what to make of this poem, what to think nor what to write down in my notes. But now after this exercise I really think I have something, I'm not sure what that something is, nor will I know it till class and Daniel talks over it will I know what I think but at least I have something now. It's got to do with clothes that look shiny :)
-Nessa
Haha! I think I like your poem more! ;)
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